A few weeks ago I saw a video on Facebook titled “Indoctrination in Common Core ELA textbooks”. It was posted on June 15 by Aliēnātus: the truth is out there. The goal was to open people’s minds to what was in the Common Core curriculum and that the curriculum is horrible because it “indoctrinates” students starting in the 1st grade. According to the commentators in the video, the book(s) shown have been approved by the state of Utah.
I was outraged, but not by the curriculum, rather by the ignorance of the commentators in the video and by the comments on the video. It still outrages me, thus, I have decided to embedded the video and share my thoughts.
My Issues with Statements Made in This Video
The commentators have no authority on the subject matter. The commentators who are evaluating the curriculum have no stated background in teaching, curriculum planning/design, or education. One commentator claims he has a 6-year-old (1st grader). This does NOT make him an expert on what is taught or should be taught but isn’t being taught in the 1st grade. It is apparent that he has not seen the entire K-12 system as a whole, its successes and its failures, from the standpoint of an educator. He is a parent. He may be an expert on the interests of his child, but that does not translate into the expertise of the educational goals for that grade.
The commentators’ narrow focus on the title, “Literature and Writing” ignores the benefits of working with content in different contexts. Since the commentators are not well-versed in educational issues, they do not understand that one of the major problems of the American school system is that we pulled apart our content and put each one into different boxes called grade level and subject matter from which we were told to never deviate into another subject or grade level. In other words, the 1st grade English teacher taught 1st grade English, which included reading, spelling, writing, and literature. Students were not taught reading in 2nd grade science class because “that’s the 1st grade English teacher’s job.” We now know this chunking to be very problematic and the term “cross-curricular” has entered the educational vocabulary. Encouraging students to write about advocacy in a “literature and writing” class highlights that you don’t just write papers in an English class and talk about society in social studies, you can mix them!
It’s also important to note that writing is not just about the motor skills of writing letters and sentence structure. Why should we waste students’ precious time writing about insignificant things like, “The sky is blue. I like puppies,” when they are capable of so much more? Many students have already grasped these basic verbal concepts by the 1st grade, thus, we are wasting their time by re-teaching the same concept with only adding the motor skill of writing. We end up hindering the grow of their mental skills; and when their brain isn’t stimulated, students get bored, which can directly lead to learning, “nothing” all day and hating school.
The commentators project their adult understanding and definition of “advocacy” and cannot fathom that a 6-year-old can advocate for anything. The concept of “advocacy” can be complicated or boiled down to a very simple basic element: standing up for what you think is right. Isn’t that the exact same message behind the anti-bullying campaigns in elementary schools right now? The commentators laugh and one says sarcastically, “Yeah, my six-year-old does that all the time. She looks at what is wrong in the world and says how do I organize my people and my community to fix these social problems?” By six years old, kids are able to identify things that are right and wrong as well as come up with ideas on how to change the status quo. Why tell a six-year-old, “no, you’re only six, you have nothing positive to contribute to your family/house, neighborhood, your school, or your city”? We’re not talking about six-year-olds organizing and starting a national revolution, but they can see that there are people who are starving and that creating a community garden and donating the food to a local food bank can help. It’s also fathomable that 1st graders could organize a school-wide blanket drive to donate blankets to the American Red Cross for the upcoming winter.
The commentators ignore the intended audience of the curriculum guidebook that they mock. The guidebook is written for a college-educated educator. The voice and style of the paragraphs is written such that it will not be an insult to the intelligence of an elementary school teacher. The educator is able to translate the broad concept of “call to action” into simpler words that each individual student will understand. The concept of “call to action” really isn’t difficult to understand at all. A six-year old definitely understands, “the sentence that says ‘I want you to clean your room.’ is a call to action because ‘clean’ is a verb, and a verb is an action, right?” Why are we insulting the intelligence of six-year-olds? If they are capable of understanding the concept, willing to learn it, and desiring more out of their education, then we should be teaching them. It is the role of an educated, effective teacher to translate concepts from complex to simple. Teacher guidebooks are written for the teacher, not the student.
The commentators have ignored the basic principles of persuasion: logos, ethos, and pathos. Logos ethos, and pathos are Greek words that used to describe the three types of appeal that are used to convince people in an argument. They are essentially logical appeal, credibility appeal, and emotional appeal. These are very complex subjects that are repeatedly studied throughout middle school, high school, and college. However, the commentators do not understand that the fundamental understanding of these complex concepts must begin early. Since the commentators do not seem to have an education background, they have not experienced the problems that occur later when this ground work is not laid. An effective elementary teacher is able to teach a very basic understanding of these concepts.
The commentators have ignored the value of recognizing how someone is manipulating you in favor of focusing on the fact that we are equipping 1st graders with tools to manipulate. A six-year-old has already experienced manipulation using all three types of appeal: in video and/or print advertisements, in overhearing an argument between their parents or other adults, or by engaging in an argument themselves. It is imperative that students begin to understand how peer pressure works (usually a combination of all three, but typically lots of logical and emotional appeal) and how to avoid failing prey to it.
The commentators take issue with the example of arguing with their parents. My gut instinct is that the reason parents were chosen is that they were looking for an authority figure that a child may feel comfortable arguing with, and it’s pretty safe to assume that each child has at least one parent (or guardian). But I think the bigger problem is if you are worried that we are teaching six-year-olds how to argue back to their parents instead of simply obeying and doing as their told without incident…perhaps you need to re-evaluate your parenting style. I mean..if you can be outsmarted or outargued by a six-year-old…then you probably have not taught your kids WHY you want them to do something, which is just as important as the WHAT. Why don’t we want to equip our children as early as we can with the weapon of words instead of the weapon of fists? Why do we want to enforce blind obedience, but then wonder why kids aren’t thinking for themselves?
The commentators fall victim to the exact “problems” they criticize in the teacher’s guidebook. The commentators emphasize and pause on certain words to elicit an emotional response from the viewer. They are trying to convince the viewers that this guidebook is indoctrinating students by using their “authority” as a parent of a six year old, emphasizing emotional words, and trying to insert sarcastic commentary as part of their emotional appeal. The end goal of this video was not to objectively review the Common Core approved, curriculum guidebook for 1st grade in the state of Utah, but it was to stir up emotions and fuel rage-filled comments.